tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19648568.post5822844611776796261..comments2024-01-23T11:38:28.605-06:00Comments on Rememorandom: surviving, a poemlogankstewarthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12269634215857320344noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19648568.post-15848647842897324652011-06-01T11:49:00.487-05:002011-06-01T11:49:00.487-05:00@Paula: Heh, thank you. I appreciate it.@Paula: Heh, thank you. I appreciate it.logankstewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12269634215857320344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19648568.post-12380670438831493292011-05-27T11:31:18.366-05:002011-05-27T11:31:18.366-05:00I just loved all of it. Beautiful.I just loved all of it. Beautiful.Paula Titushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02694955415376098701noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19648568.post-58337250014126845172011-05-26T10:34:03.823-05:002011-05-26T10:34:03.823-05:00@Dave (again): Sorry if that sounded rude or like ...@Dave (again): Sorry if that sounded rude or like I was aggravated that you didn't like the word choice. That's not the case at all. I love getting feedback, and think that it only improves my writing by seeing what works and what doesn't. So, yeah. Keep it coming!logankstewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12269634215857320344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19648568.post-85373570557290406792011-05-26T10:32:31.504-05:002011-05-26T10:32:31.504-05:00@Angie: Thank you!
@Dave: The word flapping makes...@Angie: Thank you!<br /><br />@Dave: The word flapping makes me think of a flag slapping against itself in the wind, which is what I envision this man's arms doing. Hey, now don't you go calling me a doctor, too. Already too many folks do that!<br /><br />@L: Thank you, for both the comment and the idea. Handwriting evokes a certain response that typed text loses. I've got one [frame] story where this is what I've been doing, switching from journal entry (handwritten) to actual plot. Who knows if that'll e'er show up here... Anyway. Thanks again!logankstewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12269634215857320344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19648568.post-80149941360142851762011-05-25T14:11:45.961-05:002011-05-25T14:11:45.961-05:00nice.
i do like those repetitive elements and the...nice.<br /><br />i do like those repetitive elements and the play with form, especially the spacing of "o v e r". some really lovely images as well. nice resurrection imagery there.<br /><br />I think this would be striking in a roughly scratched but fluid handwriting, a masculine hand with a bit of a dramatic slant (still holding the lines you've formed).<br /><br />~L (omphaloskepsis)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19648568.post-16845541179641517772011-05-25T12:27:47.464-05:002011-05-25T12:27:47.464-05:00Nice elements. Nice wordplay. It's cool when a...Nice elements. Nice wordplay. It's cool when a poet can play with the presentation as well as word choice. Although, to be picky, "flapping" doesn't do it for me... I would consider a less grating synonym...<br /><br />Good work, Dr. Stewart!David Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07594244647778062784noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19648568.post-55112581236269093952011-05-25T11:20:27.157-05:002011-05-25T11:20:27.157-05:00Wow. That's terrific! My heart goes out to the...Wow. That's terrific! My heart goes out to the tornado victims too.Angiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01445455787485222068noreply@blogger.com