tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19648568.post6732434419334569548..comments2024-01-23T11:38:28.605-06:00Comments on Rememorandom: Writing Wednesdays: The Reformed 1.2logankstewarthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12269634215857320344noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19648568.post-30044723848012394552010-09-22T10:35:24.976-05:002010-09-22T10:35:24.976-05:00@Mattson: Ha, no, I don't think so, but thanks...@Mattson: Ha, no, I don't think so, but thanks for liking and the idea. Good luck with your next fundraiser.logankstewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12269634215857320344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19648568.post-54265273348821401642010-09-21T22:46:51.183-05:002010-09-21T22:46:51.183-05:00This one is great! I love that you continue to do...This one is great! I love that you continue to do this.<br /><br /><br />...Any plans to kickstart a short story collection yet?MThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05203400260160541629noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19648568.post-89145439403436386312010-09-17T09:21:29.444-05:002010-09-17T09:21:29.444-05:00@David: Thank you. Those lines are actually pretty...@David: Thank you. Those lines are actually pretty important to the direction of Sienne's character, and I hope it becomes more apparent over the next few additions.<br /><br />Glad you liked.logankstewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12269634215857320344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19648568.post-82113610504308800462010-09-17T02:28:11.443-05:002010-09-17T02:28:11.443-05:00This comment has been removed by the author.David Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07594244647778062784noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19648568.post-39205562515448469492010-09-17T02:27:45.858-05:002010-09-17T02:27:45.858-05:00"Did that even make them prey anymore? If no..."Did that even make them prey anymore? If not, then what was she?"<br /><br />I liked those lines a lot. Clicked for me.<br /><br />This is quite compelling. Once I started the first line, it ran right to the end, and left me wanting more. Nicely done.David Wagnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07594244647778062784noreply@blogger.com