tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19648568.post7027196696278836494..comments2024-01-23T11:38:28.605-06:00Comments on Rememorandom: Flash Fiction Friday: Something Like Midnight (2)logankstewarthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12269634215857320344noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19648568.post-78526374181534982842012-05-25T15:03:29.801-05:002012-05-25T15:03:29.801-05:00aw, love the stutter!
and curiouser and curiouser...aw, love the stutter!<br /><br />and curiouser and curiouser with this story, Logan...<br /><br />~LAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19648568.post-77439301930108055502012-05-24T08:14:26.272-05:002012-05-24T08:14:26.272-05:00@lance: Thanks for the feedback, friend. Hope you...@lance: Thanks for the feedback, friend. Hope you enjoy.<br /><br />@krista: Thank you!logankstewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12269634215857320344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19648568.post-58703296881326243732012-05-23T18:58:40.538-05:002012-05-23T18:58:40.538-05:00I like it Logan very good indeedI like it Logan very good indeedkristacolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04987484686311458627noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19648568.post-81656240537448957832012-05-22T16:37:19.233-05:002012-05-22T16:37:19.233-05:00I second Kris' motion. You've stumbled ont...I second Kris' motion. You've stumbled onto something here that's letting your voice peek out. Humble suggestion: let it be however long it ends up being.<br /><br />Curious to see how this develops...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19648568.post-65393925640152854952012-05-21T13:14:00.901-05:002012-05-21T13:14:00.901-05:00Thank you, Kris. Once again you flatter me. To a...Thank you, Kris. Once again you flatter me. To answer your question about the particular era, I can't really say. There is some antiquity in the technology, for sure, but there's also some anachronistic phrases as well. In my head I'm envisioning very late 19th Century, but I'm not 100% on that.<br /><br />Anyway, thanks very much for reading and the compliments.logankstewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12269634215857320344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19648568.post-12696637307725691662012-05-21T08:36:07.880-05:002012-05-21T08:36:07.880-05:00Logan, the beginnings of a very interesting world ...Logan, the beginnings of a very interesting world are peaking out from behind these two chapters, and I, for one, am looking forward to each subsequent entry. Is this set in the 18-19th century?<br /><br />Regardless, you've done an impeccable job of fully realizing a world that clearly isn't out own in a matter of a few hundred words. <br /><br />The force is strong with you.<br /><br /><a title="The Sound and Fury of Kristopher Denby" href="http://kristopherdenby.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">The Sound and Fury of Kristopher Denby</a>Kristopher A. Denbyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01334903630007014823noreply@blogger.com